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Hallo !! 
Wooh, after a thousand years I'm now able to submit a drawing... yay !!
I'm terribly sorry if I'm passive... 
That's all I can afford to draw... a sketch !!
Btw, that's a sketch commish for
who donated 10 points and it's equivalent to sketch request.
Jelena of *Jenniej92
Taken me almost two hours drawing it a while ago in class when I was doing nothing since there were no teachers around. Haha, it has taken me too long with this... I actually had the first drawing of it last month. Sadly it went missing days ago.
Okie, I found a comshop with affordable scanning service !! 
Now I can submit some of my works !! Only,... one by one.. haha !! I don't want flooding you right away, okei ??
This is my first attempt to do sketch, okei ?? And it is with the use of Faber-Castell HB 2 I found a while ago in school... haha !! What can you say about it ?? Please tell me of any flaws in there !
Comments and FAVES are mostly welcomed !!
If you find any flaws in this work, feel free to CRITIQUE me a!!
That's all !!
smile and always be happy !!
Lovelots,
=ALzRitH
Wooh, after a thousand years I'm now able to submit a drawing... yay !!
I'm terribly sorry if I'm passive... That's all I can afford to draw... a sketch !!Btw, that's a sketch commish for
who donated 10 points and it's equivalent to sketch request. Jelena of *Jenniej92 Taken me almost two hours drawing it a while ago in class when I was doing nothing since there were no teachers around. Haha, it has taken me too long with this... I actually had the first drawing of it last month. Sadly it went missing days ago. Okie, I found a comshop with affordable scanning service !! Now I can submit some of my works !! Only,... one by one.. haha !! I don't want flooding you right away, okei ?? This is my first attempt to do sketch, okei ?? And it is with the use of Faber-Castell HB 2 I found a while ago in school... haha !! What can you say about it ?? Please tell me of any flaws in there !Comments and FAVES are mostly welcomed !!
If you find any flaws in this work, feel free to CRITIQUE me a!!
That's all !!
smile and always be happy !!
Lovelots,
=ALzRitHImage size
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Overall
Vision Originality
Technique ImpactThe detail in this blew me away.
Everything, from her hair, to her eyes, and even to the background... it's just beautiful.
The detail in the hair... it's great. I love how you didn't just 'draw' the hair, but you created it. The way it falls across her shoulders, how it peeks out of her hat... it looks alive. <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt="
" title=" (Smile)"/> I love the way you create the fabric, as well. It flows across her body like real material would. The shading and wrinkles are all in the right place, and the designs, however simple solid stripes might be) are eye catching and pretty. <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt="
" title=" (Smile)"/> The hat is a lovely touch. <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/h/h…" width="15" height="13" alt="
" title="Heart"/> I really like the way you did the background! The outline of white around her, with the brownish color all around... it really isolates the subject and makes her stand out all the more. <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt="
" title=" (Smile)"/> The only thing I can suggest improvement for is the right eye... Something about the pupil in comparison to the Iris seems a little off. Nothing major, just something that seemed to stand out a bit .
Amazing job! Keep at it! <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/l/l…" width="26" height="17" alt="
" title="Love"/>